Our rough cut 1

This is our first rough cut of the footage we hope to use for our final video. Though we are happy with a lot of the footage we have done we think some footage could be edited and changed to make the best possible video footage which we can. To start the first shot we have showing the makeup is slightly shaky so we hope to film that again with a steadier focus. We also hope to re-film the Odd Bar location as we feel the shots there are slightly too dark so we hope to film the shots again but with a light focused on the actress to make her clearly seen by the viewers. We also hope to show more extreme close up shots of the actress as we think this fits the song perfectly and will help to relate to the audience as well as being meat shots.